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I know what you were getting at, Aet. I'm not trying to put you at fault on purpose. I read what the new member said. It was not mean, it ...

Aet, please refrain from dissrespecting new members. Teh, very well put together poem. :) I really like how you put so much emotion into this. I also really like the ...

Wow, Tiff, this is really good. I love the rhythem and flow in this. I love how you carefully chose a perferct on-going flow from start to finish. Good job. ...

I like this, Tiff. I think you're an amzing poet. I love the details into this. I love how you described every bit of each line. Keep up the good ...

Hmm....I like this, but I don't *really* see where you're getting at with time flying. Try to add more details into each line. I hope this helps! -Rick.

Hmmm....I really don't see what you're getting at here, or where you're coming from with this. Try to extend this and add more detail in it so the reader can ...

Cmarie, please refream that kind of comment on a crit, and keep it only in PMs...-.- The crit: I like this. I don't really see what it's about, but, it's ...

Wow, Tiff, I reall like this. I liked how you deeply expalained what it's like to be lied to. I also lik how you can feel the emotion into this. ...

I like this. I do, however, have some confusion on the meaning of this piece. I don't see if it's saying you have a good life, or a bad life. ...

This is really good, Linds. I really love your rhythm and rhyming in this piece. I also love the emotion expressed. Also, nice word choice and flow. Good work. Keep ...

This is amazing. I love your rhyming and rhythm. This is really sad too. I liked how you expressed the emotion into this piece. Keep up the good work! -Rick.

Wow, that's really good, Crysi. I liked the flow and rhythm in both stanzas. I liked how you described the feeling of losing someone you love and them lying to ...

Excellent job on the rhythm, God. My problem is, that I don't see what the meaning behind this poem is. Try to extend this a bit and add more details ...

Wow, Dreamer. This is really beautiful. I love the rhythm and rhyming into this. Excellent job on the spelling. I also liked how you described the tree in depth details ...

I like this. I like that it's really deep. Try to put a space between each sentence though. And try to add commss inbetween words. Also, I think this needs ...